sidebar
Logo Top Banner
Home
slogan Alaska Timeline Alaska Kids About
Peer Work
Family & Community
History & Culture
Digital Archives
Narrative & Healing
Reading & Writing
Libraries & Booksellers
Teaching & Learning
Contact Us

  
Search Peer Work Only
Sign up for newsletter
  
Find us on Facebook
   ENews
   April 2011 E-News
March 2011 E-News
January 2011 E-News
September 2010 E-News
May 2010 E-News
March 2010 E-News
January 2010 E-News
November 2009 E-News
September 2009 E-News


Home  >  Peer Work
18. CONTACT!
By Gretchen Legler
Genre: Non-fiction
Category: Student Examples

In his famous essay about climbing Mt. Ktaadn, the highest mountain in Maine, Henry David Thoreau writes about a moment when he feels what he calls "Contact!" with the earth. He writes: "The tops of mountains are among the unfinished parts of the globe...only daring and insolent men, perchance, go there...Perhaps I most fully realized that this was primeval, untamed and forever untamable Nature, or whatever else men call it, while coming down this part of the mountain." At one point, then, he becomes rather afraid and awed by his experience and writes these famous lines: "Think of our life in nature,--daily to be shown matter, to come in contact with it,--rocks, trees, wind on our cheeks! The solid earth! The actual world! The common sense! Contact! Contact! Who are we? Where are we?" Put yourself in a situation where you make contact with something in the natural world. This cam mean simply sitting still in a warm place, feeling the rock under your backside. Or it can mean walking in the wind, climbing a mountain, wading in a stream, lying in the snow. Write about what it feels like to make that contact.

Writing Sample:

At Siple Dome, a scientific field camp on the West Antarctic ice sheet, some 500 miles from McMurdo Station, Kendrick Taylor, a man who studies ice, took me on a snowmobile picnic one sunny Sunday. We drove out from the camp (a collection of tents and canvas jamesways--long buildings that look like dark green caterpillars lying atop the snow) about 10 kilometers on snowmobiles, into the flat whiteness. We followed a flag line, a line of green flags marking a safe route along the snow, until we reached the end of it. We stopped our snowmobiles and Kendrick said to me, "Go ahead another two kilometers and turn your machine off and just sit. I'll wait here." So I did. Ice and skyI drove out into the horizon, a horizon like I'd never seen. I could imagine, if I didn't know better, that I might drive right off the edge of the earth it was so flat right there. The only thing separating the earth from the sky in this place is a thin white line and a faint change in color from white white to blue white. The snowy wind moved like a fog over the ground, fast, like a slinky, elegant, snaky thing, throwing off my sense of balance slightly. I drove for two kilometers, watching the odometer as I went. Then I stopped, turned off the machine and sat in the quiet. I got off the snowmobile and lay down in the snow, so that I could feel the coolness of it all along my back and legs. Bundled in my red parka and wind pants I wasn't cold. I spread my legs out and my arms out, so I looked like I might be making a snow angel. All I heard was the wind. I heard the wind blowing tiny sharp crystals of snow over me, past my ears. I could feel them blowing over my face. I shut my eyes. When I roused myself, I looked down at my legs and they were covered with snow. It hadn't taken more than ten or fifteen minutes to nearly cover me, to nearly bury me in the snow. I felt a little like a husky huddled down in a snow cave, a little hole in the snow for its breath; like the boxes and boxes of cargo lined up around Siple Dome camp and drifted over with snow, like the jamesways themselves that had to be unearthed before the Siple Dome workers could even start cooking, bathing, sleeping in them. How easily I could have disappeared.

Analysis:

In this piece I tried to give a sense of what it was like to have Contact with the snow in this way, and how it had frightened me.
Illustration above is "The Line Between Ice and Sky and Mina Bluff." Copyright 11.24.97

Related Articles
»
Writing About Place Intro


sidebar
  Contact Us       LitSite Alaska, Copyright © 2000 - 2014. All rights reserved. University of Alaska Anchorage.
University of Alaska Anchorage